Once upon a time there where three caterpillars called Fred, Ned, and Edd. Fred is the green one, Ned is the blue one, and Edd is the white one with rainbow spots. Remember that now.
One day Fred, Ned, and Edd decided to go exploring. So they packed their lunch, said goodbye to their pet Aphids and set off.
Half an hour later as they where about to step over the boundary of the garden, they came across a lake. "That's funny!" Said Ned puzzled. "I'm sure that lake wasn't here yesterday!". Meanwhile Edd (who was carrying the lunch) started to throw bits of rock into the 'lake' when a big gust of wind came over them blowing their lunch out of the bag and into the lake! "Oh no!" Cried Edd. "Our lunch!" Exclaimed Fred.
But there was nothing they could do because the wind had sent ripples in the water which carried the bits of cabbage farther and farther out into the lake until it was all in the middle and way out of reach. "What are we going to eat for lunch now?" Asked Edd. "We'll have to find something." Replied Fred. "I know a place where there is lots of weird and wonderful food."Said Ned. "A fly told me about it the other day. But he also said it can be quit dangerous with lots of toxic gasses the can make you faint if you breath it in to much. So we'll have to careful." It was then decided that they would all go into the strange food place and try to find something to eat. "Where exactly is this place Ned?" Asked Fred. "I think he said it was this way." Said Ned. So they crawled and crawled and crawled.... and crawled some more until they came to a GINORMOUS wooden thing that almost looked like a very very high cliff. "How do we get in?" Asked Edd. "I don't know if we can to be honest!" answered Ned. "We'll have to go back and see if there is another way in." Said Fred wisely. So back they went until they came to another door... and this one was open! "Hooray!" Shouted Edd. "I told you I would find the way!" Exclaimed Ned. "Uhhhh... no. You didn't Ned." Said Fred. "Oh." Said Ned. And they crept into the house through to the kitchen where they saw the most wonderful sight in the creepy crawly world! "It's beautiful!" Cried Edd romantically. "Dig in!!!" Shouted Fred, and they all climbed up the cupboards and onto the bench where there was all the food they could possible imagine! There where apples, bread, banana's, pears, coffee beans, (which Fred soon discovered weren't to tasty) and all sorts of food packets. First, Fred tried some apple and found it alright. Then Edd tried some bread and thought that was quite tasty. And then Ned tried some garlic pearls that had been left on the bench and found that they where simply downright disgusting. It was only the that Edd discovered the most amazing thing in all of the discoverationy science in the whole caterpillary world!!! The CHOCOLATE FUDGE BISCUIT! So they ate and they ate until they could eat no more and took what was left of it home which is also where they became the most famous bugs in the whole garden, and on top of all this where knighted by the one and only Queen Verruca ruler of all bugs.
So Sir Fred, Sir Ned, and Sir Edd lived happily ever after and where no longer the three hungry caterpillars.
THE END.
Hey Grace,
ReplyDeleteLoved your story! Awesome job. I especially like the way you get to know the personalities of the caterpillars as you read, well done.
I also like 'discoverationy science'. Discoverationy is my new favourite word.